Matt Bellamy

This was okay. One thing that niggled at me was that the rhymes sound a bit forced, so much so that I felt you were just saying things for the ...

I hate it when someone writes a poem which gives me nothing to criticize. Telling you what's good is still helpful, aye? xD Well, I love the ending, the way ...

Firstly, all your it's should be its. It's is short for it is, and its means something belongs to it. This will be a winter, without snow, without Christmas. I ...

You sue big words! :P Well, more unusual than big really, which made this difficult for me to read, because I didn't really know what you were trying to say. ...

I really like this - it's very cute. I can't quite get my head around the first line, but it sounds so good that I don't mind. Maybe add a ...

Walking into the kitchen, where my mother's at. This sounds a little to informal. Like, "hey, where are my homies at?" I smile back and beam at her - using ...

Distingt to touch, though left unfelt; Distinct, you mean. A breath of life that keeps some sane; A fix; escape; it wakes the brain, pumping passion through your veins; the ...

I’m trying to make it easier you know. I'd put a comma after easier. then when I loose myself away, Loose or lose? I'm not sure which you meant here. ...

I want to know you; --The use of a colon doesn't make much sense here. My hometown. My own body. --I would change this to My hometown, my own body, ...

I liked the ending, too, it is a little lonely, especially the lambs... I don't think you need the first line. I mean, the title already explains what the poem ...

Very well written, I like your style. The indentation of that line in the first stanza is nice. Someone once said to me that poems which only address a single ...

This is very cute! Only a couple of things: Who’s big brother and how titanic sank. Firstly, Titanic needs a capital letter, and I personally would put "the Titanic". Also, ...

As I walk past, by the stair, Those two eyes follow me everywhere. I am not intimidated by that dirty stare. No, I am not and I don't care. I ...

This is alright. It does seem in a lot of places that you were trying to rhyme just for the sake of rhyming, and while it's great when a poem ...

I love how you made the city sound like a baby! Hehe, that's a nice, original concept, and I quite enjoyed it. It's so hard to critique something after so ...